Night Mistress

this is kinda of cool. i plan to check out the second chapter tomorrow.

Thanks you guys for reading my story.

wow! this is freaky. i like it. i more to read more of this. you must work on the second part.

I finally read it. and i like it. it ws addicting and i couldn't stop after reading the first chapter. the whole Mimi and Jack thing was creepy. as for ...

Sleeping Valor: is that better? i could see why you would get confused.

Bunnie_i_am: I'm glad you find my story enjoy. I'm sorry about the tied-up tummy. I am working on the next chapter as we speak. I will PM you when i ...

Bunnie_i_am: Yeah, but I knew it was going to be mention sooner or later. Keep reading and you will find out his name.

Abocreature No problem on PMing you. In fact, if you want me to, I will PM you whenever i post a new chapter. thanks again.

this is cool. i think you should continue, and i also think you have a budding romance on your hands. it's good. i like it. i hope you continue.

it's different. i will admit to that. It does draw me in and want to ready more. so, i will be looking out for future chapters. good luck. Night Mistress

i like this edited version better.

I want to readit, but i can't find it anywhere for me to borrow.

umm....that's was intersting! i hope there is more of this.

that's really interesting. Everything is great! i don't anything wrong with this chapter. i hope you continue writing. good luck. i will be reading the others.

I liked it, good writing. I think I would explain what was happening in more detail. Maybe explain the sitouation more. if you read the next chapter, it's goes into ...